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Z: ZEN

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the pond lies silent

sleeping in the morning sun

diving into  its clear depths

i find myself at peace

my work on dusty earth is done..

silence follows me

as i slice through the water

swimming to the murky floor

rays of light surround me

my work on the parched earth is done.

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  1. areadingwriter's avatar rosemawrites says:
    May 2, 2016 at 13:47

    such a lovely lovely comparison, zen indeed. 🙂

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  2. Jo Wake's avatar Jo Wake says:
    April 30, 2016 at 19:48

    Very evocative.

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  3. Bish Denham's avatar Bish Denham says:
    April 30, 2016 at 19:18

    Wow, beautiful, really beautiful. Congratulations on finishing. Time to relax and celebrate!

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  4. lifeasapotpourri's avatar lifeasapotpourri says:
    April 30, 2016 at 14:19

    lovely comparison…!! 🙂 And a beautiful post to end the challenge with. Congratulations!!! Happy weekend

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    1. ipsyb's avatar ipsyb says:
      April 30, 2016 at 15:12

      Thank you ! 🙂

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  5. zannie a-z hopper's avatar zannie a-z hopper says:
    April 30, 2016 at 10:04

    love that comparison between wet and dry…water so inviting, earth to be left behind

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    1. ipsyb's avatar ipsyb says:
      April 30, 2016 at 15:12

      Thanks, 🙂

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