C: Croodle #AtoZChallenge

C

Croodle: to cower or crouch down; to draw oneself together, as for warmth; to cling close together, or nestle close to a person; snuggle

In my cosmos

you were the sun the stars, the light, the dark

I clung to you

till your harsh words shattered my universe

Only I know

how your whirling disguise pierced my eyes

Blinded, I ran

 but my soul still croodles to the form of your body

Doodled in my heart.

4 Comments Add yours

  1. sanchwrites says:

    Croodle! What a cute word and I love what it means. You’ve worked it so well in your poem and the word play with doodle is clever! 🙂

    Cascade – Woman of the modern world

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  2. ipsyb says:

    Thank you.

    Like

  3. Beautifully written!

    I love the play of the last line 🙂

    Aditi

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  4. swathishenoy says:

    Ah heartbreak! But I so love this poem. You have written it so well 🙂

    Crushes

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