J: Jacaranda

Autumn nights usher

a carpet of purple blooms

to tread on at dawn

the fragrance of your absence

forgotten for just a while


4 Comments Add yours

  1. A powerful Tanka for the challenge. Subtly done and that makes it unique.

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    1. ipsyb says:

      Thank you.


  2. ipsyb says:

    Thanks! 🙂


  3. rosemawrites says:

    oh. the first two lines are just so perfectly beautiful, and then comes the fourth line. this is a subtle heartbreaking piece! Great job!

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