A: alchemy

at night, uncontrolled

your fingers close over mine

darkness turns to gold.


11 Comments Add yours

  1. rosemawrites says:

    oh. this is short yet sweet! 🙂

    @rosemawrites from
    A Reading Writer


  2. mott342 says:

    Beautifully done.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ipsyb says:

      Thank you, 🙂


    1. ipsyb says:

      Thank you.


  3. roweeee says:

    How beautiful! I have only recently got into Haiku after my son had to write them for school and now I’m hooked and have been writing a few myself.
    Am enjoying getting back on the A-Z wagon and checking out loads of blogs.
    xx Rowena


    1. ipsyb says:

      It’s an enticing format, isn’t it? I find myself counting off syllables intermittently. My girls think I’m mad!!! 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. roweeee says:

        My kids think I’m mad too…especially writing these letters to dead poets.

        Liked by 1 person

  4. Loved this. Looking forward to the rest of your challenge.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. raesquiggles says:

    Very evocative. Good luck with the rest of the challenge.
    @Raesquiggles from
    The Quiet Writer

    Liked by 1 person

    1. ipsyb says:

      Thank you! 🙂


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